Very informative and interesting commentary from the author
A very quick read. I’d give it a 6 out of 11 in may ratings. I was expecting more of the story’s premise but I felt that I needn’t expect too much while following the protagonist’s own actions and inactions.
I do like it short and simple. Honestly, If he did use unnecessary dialogue and backstories, I would definitely give this a 3 out of 11.
My rating: 3 of 5 stars
Rated 6/11: A decent book and yet lacking. Inasmuch that I was supposed to give it a 8/11, I was not pleased by its final pages. Witty and neatly written; I enjoyed reading the passages mostly but somehow I was waiting for more ; some twists I think?…not commonly known? But still I’m looking forward for my next David Levithan book, “Everyday”. I hope I would have time to read it by June.
My rating: 5 of 5 stars
Excellent book! I was very impressed by the amount of research the author used to compile for this project. While I was reading the book, I can almost imagine myself watching a documentary in Animal Planet or NatGeo and the author’s descriptive style is almost similar to fiction writers’ narrative technique. Even though, there is an enormous amount of scientific explanations, It feels natural to my untrained ear.
This is my first bird book and I admit that it would be harder to top it off. What suprised me the most was that I have no specific interest in birds at all. But wait!, scrap that. I do remember that my older brother got into pigeons way back in grade school and the early part in high school. He was so passionate in training and testing homing some of them. I do recall, he had a minimum of 5 and had a group of enthusiasts that were teaching him some tricks. He was very diligent and feeding and caring for them but what sparked interest in me was not the actuality of pigeons as pets, but was when I read in our library that these birds do have a mysterious skill of returning back to their lofts unaided with previous knowledge on where they will be left. I said to myself “Whaaatt???” And then I read that “True Navigation” in birds were both fascinating and baffling. That was in Grade School, probably 2nd Grade. Fast forward to 2017 and I got so engaged in reading this book I forgot about my short stint in reading that brief article. Funny how small things could make you remember tiny bits of your past. Information about the Avian family is generous throughout and I thought I was going to be bored but I realized later on, I already reached the end wanting for more. Sadly, I didn’t have the precious time to push through with other works in the bibliography section, instead I came to decide that If there will be a time in the future that I will read another bird book, it would still be this one.
I admit I was too slow to finish this as it took me almost a month ‘coz I kept on rereading the initial chapters almost 3 times because I really liked the content. Even though many questions were left unanswered I still felt satisfied due to the manner in which Ackerman made it genuine for the readers/herself to feel the wonder in nature itself. Yes! We need more Ackermans in animal research!
Finally, before I finish this review, all at once, I have the strongest urge to list this as one of my favorites. Birds are not my favorite but this book is.
Wow!!!Birds are truly amazing. Nature is!
My rating: 5 of 5 stars
Amazing adventures by Percy and the gang of half-bloods!!! Funny and fast-paced, engaging plot with honest morals for young adults. I love how Percy is developing to be one of the most powerful youngsters in all of the fantasy genre. I really want those toys and weapons that he has right now. Book 3, here I come!
My rating: 1 of 5 stars
I felt the book was very selective of scientific evidence on how the writer came up with his theory. Many times he would use analogies which he uses to compare other animal classes with us and how it should be thought that our genes are the ones controlling our evolution and therefore our future as a species. Being a scientific work, the writer negates many factors which shaped and will shape animal/human evolution in the modern era and mostly focuses on a select number of examples which he uses as analogies and metaphors to describe his point of view. This method of writing misleads the readers into thinking that many things are best compared and defined in popularized scientific commentary.
I felt that if the theory must be proven universally true, he should refrain from avoiding “hiding” behavioural experiments of other animals that would debunk his research.
One example was when he came to the menopause topic in women. And I quote:
This seems a good moment to mention the puzzling phenomenon known as the menopause, the rather abrupt termination of a human female reproductive fertility in middle age. This may not have occurred too commonly in our wild ancestors, since not many women would have lived that long anyway. …
… there is something genetically ‘deliberate’ about the menopause-that it is an ‘adaptation’. It is rather difficult to explain.
See what he did there? After two sentences he dismissed the issue and went on to continue expounding the Medawar theory of ageing in connection to how he assumes it explains menopause. The flaw here is he can’t explain why in other classes in our own animal family, this is not present at all. I am not a zoologist, biologist etc or something of a person who deals with scientifically proven facts in the internet but I do remember when I was in high school, my biology teacher told us humans are unique in that menopause is only experienced by female humans. I did a quick google search and here it is:
“Survival of the fittest” hypothesis
This hypothesis suggests that younger mothers and offspring under their care will fare better in a difficult and predatory environment because a younger mother will be stronger and more agile in providing protection and sustenance for herself and a nursing baby. The various biological factors associated with menopause had the effect of male members of the species investing their effort with the most viable of potential female mates. One problem with this hypothesis is that we would expect to see menopause exhibited in the animal kingdom.
Menopause in the animal kingdom appears to be uncommon, but the presence of this phenomenon in different species has not been thoroughly researched. Life histories show a varying degree of senescence; rapid senescing organisms (e.g., Pacific salmon and annual plants) do not have a post-reproductive life-stage. Gradual senescence is exhibited by all placental mammalian life histories.
Menopause has been observed in several species of nonhuman primates, including rhesus monkeys, and chimpanzees. Menopause also has been reported in a variety of other vertebrate species including elephants, short-finned pilot whales, killer whales,and other cetaceans, the guppy, the platyfish, the budgerigar, the laboratory rat and mouse, and the opossum. However, with the exception of the short-finned pilot whale, such examples tend to be from captive individuals, and thus they are not necessarily representative of what happens in natural populations in the wild.
Dogs do not experience menopause; the canine estrus cycle simply becomes irregular and infrequent. Although older female dogs are not considered good candidates for breeding, offspring have been produced by older animals. Similar observations have been made in cats.
There are numerous parts in the book of this sort.
He quickly dismissed it and that he can’t explain why there is some sort of phenomenon in humans but not in most other animals. If genes do master the control of our biological well being, why then can’t he explain that mystery and if it really is by chance that women has a distinct control switch not found in men(which is also another mystery being in the same species)…why does he always digress and keep on following his theory already flawed from the start.
When it finally breaks down I shall introduce other metaphors. Incidentally, there is of course no ‘architect’. The DNA instructions have been assembled by natural selection.
If I remember it right, this was is Chapter 2. My question is: did the writer just jumbled letters in his mind and let natural selection make the paragraphs, outlined chapters, sentences, punctuations, spelling to come up with a book so organized and defined to be published and printed for mass market appeal? We are complex beings and yet he does refuse the fact that he himself is a by-product of this mind-boggling feat. If he is produced by natural selection only, why is it that we are so very different from the rest? We can’t even deal proving that chimpanzee to human is 100% gapless in evolution. How else could we be certain that nothing happened in that gap?
An underlying problem with this book is that he uses scientific investigation to prove that everything is by chance and what is confusing all the more is that the reader is misled by his case in point that everything is controlled by genes without external help from environment, climate, events, culture, technology, ecology, morality, affection and so on. Oh my, we have a lot of things to think of to consider if we are to study even one species, and that is us. Humans are not solely controlled by a limited number of these gene theory or Meme as he calls it as we are capable of higher knowledge than most of what we see around us. The writer lacks clearness in his definite approval of his subject.
Dawkins’s own position is somewhat ambiguous: he welcomed N. K. Humphrey’s suggestion that “memes should be considered as living structures, not just metaphorically” and proposed to regard memes as “physically residing in the brain”. Later, he argued that his original intentions, presumably before his approval of Humphrey’s opinion, had been simpler. At the New Directors’ Showcase 2013 in Cannes, Dawkins’ opinion on memetics was deliberately ambiguous.
Finally the most flawed statement which could be found at the final pages:
The only kind of entity that has to exist in order for life to arise, anywhere in the universe, is the immortal replicator(DNA).
Wow! an ethologist, evolutionary biologist speaking as if he knew how the universe works. Even Stephen Hawking or Carl Sagan aren’t certain of how life came to be in our own planet, more so on other galaxies which might have possible life probabilities existing on their own. You’ve got to have a clear sense of knowledge and expertise in cosmology to even include the universe in your own biological research done in your small home called Earth which is but a tiny piece in the vastness of existence.
You can’t just rely on Charles Darwin’s concepts and theories in evolution and force your way through your own hypothesis without proving salient notes for all living things in the planet. With his final statement, he just gave away his true intentions of writing this book and that is: he has no belief in a creator who created everything. Everything he has to say leads to this premise which fails miserably on all points. Ultimately, he disguises his theory in the form of misdirection.
View all my reviews
My rating: 4 of 5 stars
This is very similar to his book, A Brief History of Time. Not so much to review about but still a very good reference for most cosmology enthusiasts, students and scientists.